Litany by the Sea

In an abundant wood
Every feather in a wing
Every medicine taken
Every blood draw and needle stick
Know each measure of your breath,
Every step is a Prayer
3 responses to “Litany by the Sea”
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Very creative ppost
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This is beautiful. I would love to hear the “revised” version, although I can’t imagine that adding new energies to this piece would improve it significantly, as so much of its beauty lies in its way of speaking such profound truth in a very simple way. I suppose you could play around with that if you wanted, although personally I think it is lovely as is.
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